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The Script Note package is the most extensive that I offer. It provides you with notes to all the scenes of the screenplay in chronological order and will typically run into 40-50 pages.
The package is best suited for screenplays that have already gone through at least 2 or 3 rewrites.
It is therefore not an analysis that will address major story issues. Studios and Production companies favor this package when all major issues with a story have been solved and need guidance on how to fix issues related to the writing of the individual scenes.
The package is then mostly used as part of a longer development deal; Studios will start with the
Development package that addresses major, overarching plot problems. And once those have been solved, and a definite course for the story, have been agreed upon, then they move on to the script notes.
Contact me for pricing info.
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